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please brother

i want to ask for a wish 
if you really do exist 
god
give me one more chance
to say goodbye 
i don't want it to end this way
all i want to say is sorry
that i could not play my part 
as a true brother

if i get it to try again
may be in my next life term
will you be with me as my brother 
i will carry your bag 
take your hand into mine 
and walk you to the school everyday
share your fears every night

i am so angry that
all i do is blame myself
you left me out in the blue 
i do not have a single clue 
about what to do

i go to sleep just to see you in my dreams 
to remember how you used to hug 
and how we used to fight
how i punched a guy 
when he made you cry

i want to ask you why 
you left me all alone
when we had so much fun
we made our own board games
we played them all day long

what does it mean 
to leave me all this way
you don't know how i feel
i cried with so much pain
when they said you are no more 

you left this world so young
what did i do to offend you
this is not at all fair
i want to do it all again
i want to end it well

brother please come back to me
i want to trade my life for yours

Boomerang contest

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:16:00 PM

    Ravi' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:49:00 PM

    Ravi, congratulations, such a sad tale of a young boys perspective. I feel it.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:47:00 AM

    Many Congratulations on your win Ravi xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 6:40:00 PM

    Congrad's Light & Love Always

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:25:00 PM

    Ravi, love your winning poem in Michael's "boomerang contest" always & forever :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:39:00 PM

    This is beautiful. I feel your pain an yearning for your sweet brother. May he come in your dreams.

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/6/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He does, I keep having these recurring dreams, me hugging him in them. Feels very real.. and thanq
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 9:26:00 AM

    Congrats on your win :) amazing lines.... so very heartfelt...

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/5/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 7:08:00 AM

    Congratulation on your winning spot Ravi xx

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/5/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:14:00 PM

    Ravi, a wonderful winning poem~ PD

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/5/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.. :D
  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Really emotion provoking confession- thank you for sharing. Congrats placing in my contest :)

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran Date: 2/5/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 7/1/2011 11:09:00 PM

    very moving. I feel your pain.

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 2:22:00 PM

    so sad ...I hope you and yors are OK? Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 3:48:00 AM

    Very touching...I lost my real sister too when I was very young.

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 9:35:00 PM

    i adore this write,,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 10:35:00 AM

    nice poetry. understand your feelings brother