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WASP STING

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WASP STING

A diabolic deed :
A pebble I pelted
At the hanging shelter
On the stem of plantain cluster:
Vengeance vapours ;war clouds.

A smart wasp dared ;
Sting of sting ; I writhed :
Smouldering compunction ;
Pricking tension ;
I rubbed red forehead mine.

As a balloon tiny,
Blown with atrocity,
My forehead swelled:
Pang resolved 
Never to trespass the insect kingdom.

A big foe retreated;
An act self pledged
For the wasp hamlet:
An act ,we bewail, rusted in our hamlet,
Exposed to self absorption.

FABIYAS M V

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  1. Date: 9/27/2011 10:19:00 AM
    I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Fabiyas. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 9:29:00 AM
    A wasp sting given a new slant altogether, nice one Fabiyas. Have a lovely weekend >> James :)

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 11:47:00 AM
    Wow! I can almost feel the pain! I hate wasps with a passion! I am severely allergic to them, but a bottle filled with a mixture of Dawn dish liquid and water will safely take any wasp or bee out of commission. It works better than the wasp spray they sell in the store! Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 2:10:00 PM
    Who has not experienced the sting of wasp, Fabiyas. I appreciate your comments on my poems,

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 7:13:00 AM
    Well, I can't decide if it is the wasp or person who is self absorbed...I hope the wasp..Enjoyed..I have had a few stings myself not any fun..I have allergy problems that always loom with the fear this one could be the huge one that causes a severe reaction..I am glad that you stopped by my Sestina "Joy Of Different Seasons"..Sara

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 6:22:00 AM
    Exquisitely written FABIYAS and don't like those pesky wasps either.. u have presented the picture very well allowing the reader to feel the sting too.. excellent use of wonderful words .. be blessed this happy day with luv..

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 9:46:00 PM
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