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Spectacular

 A time 
few words
inside the 
empty mind
creeping along the
darkness
that you've been blowing 
through the whole time
we've been together
now that you have left 
the clouds have found me
the sky is my shelter
the stars are my friend
and i'm in love with the nature
a metaphor 
i use
i see you where
i look
i look where i can see you
And the sky is my shelter

and the stars are my friend
i write across the dark blue sky
and i draw your face with the stars
and if you were with me today
i wish this moment would be
spectacular
just like the face I've drawn 
in the sky 
with the ever shinning stars 
Oh! So spectacular

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  1. Date: 11/15/2010 7:51:00 AM
    Nice write, enjoyed reading it this morning.