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Game Hunter

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Game Hunter

.                                                   Goddess Lust

~                                              calm contemplation
~                                       trees bowing down at my feet 
~                                             prey for new season

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:38:00 AM
    Goddess Lust

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 10:03:00 PM
    Great play on word here in that last line, Hathor!

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Great Haiku, Lin-Ra...Gert

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 7:59:00 AM
    I particularly like the pun on prey ... beautiful

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 9:42:00 PM
    Lust for the hunt? Very interesting one, Hathor!

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 7:32:00 AM
    i'm speechless

  1. Date: 11/16/2010 6:06:00 AM
    nice one!

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 9:03:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hathor. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 8:02:00 AM
    Beautiful sketch of the change of Season in this lovely Haiku and thank you for your kind comments on my Poem' Thank you Mr. President'. Love and best wishes my friend....Ravindra... Hathor A . Lin. Ra

  1. Date: 11/13/2010 1:32:00 AM
    I like the way you mixed the nature of a goddess. =(^.^)= Royal

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 9:49:00 PM
    Hi Hathor.I think this is a skilfully written Haiku.In fact I think the ability in using the required amount of well defined words as you have done and yet capture the essence of your subject is to my mind the mark of good poetry.I liked this,the way it is written and the images you have used.Thank you for reading and commenting on my piece.It was written out my love for others.And my sadness at how war can be destructive of our humanity. Love June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 5:42:00 PM
    Nicely done, Hathor. I love haiku!

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 2:17:00 PM
    The obscene feeling of power. At times man is truly insane. Good write. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 1:43:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts penned..Even the wind and waves obey so to speak..I am glad that you enjoyed my work "Blanket Of Clay"..Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 1:06:00 PM
    Lovely picture. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 12:29:00 PM
    Quite an intriguing image in your haiku, Hathor. I like the way you compare the trees to "prey" for the new hunting season. Unique and thought-provoking. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 12:19:00 PM
    You show a keen sense of observation of the transition of the two seasons, hathor,

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 11:19:00 AM
    Amazingly beautiful write my friend on the changing mood of the season. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Poem’ Thank you Mr. President'. Love and best wishes.....Ravindra..... Hathor Ammut Lin Ra

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 10:52:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work! Well done!

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 10:30:00 AM
    Nice title, good connection to season and mood:)