Game Hunter by Hathor AmmutLinRa


Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2011 10:03:00 PM Great play on word here in that last line, Hathor!
Gert W. Knop Date: 1/9/2011 9:22:00 AM Great Haiku, Lin-Ra...Gert
David Smalling Date: 12/27/2010 7:59:00 AM I particularly like the pun on prey ... beautiful
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2010 9:42:00 PM Lust for the hunt? Very interesting one, Hathor!
john loving iii Date: 11/26/2010 7:32:00 AM i'm speechless
Susan Palli Date: 11/16/2010 6:06:00 AM nice one!
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/15/2010 9:03:00 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hathor. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 11/15/2010 8:02:00 AM Beautiful sketch of the change of Season in this lovely Haiku and thank you for your kind comments on my Poem' Thank you Mr. President'. Love and best wishes my friend....Ravindra... Hathor A . Lin. Ra
Royal Trevino Date: 11/13/2010 1:32:00 AM I like the way you mixed the nature of a goddess. =(^.^)= Royal
SYLVIA Coulstock Date: 11/12/2010 9:49:00 PM Hi Hathor.I think this is a skilfully written Haiku.In fact I think the ability in using the required amount of well defined words as you have done and yet capture the essence of your subject is to my mind the mark of good poetry.I liked this,the way it is written and the images you have used.Thank you for reading and commenting on my piece.It was written out my love for others.And my sadness at how war can be destructive of our humanity. Love June(Sylvia)
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/12/2010 5:42:00 PM Nicely done, Hathor. I love haiku!
daver austin Date: 11/12/2010 2:17:00 PM The obscene feeling of power. At times man is truly insane. Good write. Love, Dave
Sara Kendrick Date: 11/12/2010 1:43:00 PM Interesting thoughts penned..Even the wind and waves obey so to speak..I am glad that you enjoyed my work "Blanket Of Clay"..Sara
Joyce Johnson Date: 11/12/2010 1:06:00 PM Lovely picture. Love, Joyce
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/12/2010 12:29:00 PM Quite an intriguing image in your haiku, Hathor. I like the way you compare the trees to "prey" for the new hunting season. Unique and thought-provoking. Best wishes, Carolyn
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/12/2010 12:19:00 PM You show a keen sense of observation of the transition of the two seasons, hathor,
Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 11/12/2010 11:19:00 AM Amazingly beautiful write my friend on the changing mood of the season. Thanks for your kind appreciation of my Poem’ Thank you Mr. President'. Love and best wishes.....Ravindra..... Hathor Ammut Lin Ra
Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/12/2010 10:52:00 AM Enjoyed reading your work! Well done!
Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 11/12/2010 10:30:00 AM Nice title, good connection to season and mood:)

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