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As Rain patters and Birds sing

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As Rain patters and Birds sing

The pied piper plays                                                                                 
The  soft wind dance in the breeze                                                             
Leaves brush cheek to cheek

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  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:31:00 AM
    Celene, Celene, you better stop before you break my heart with happiness. Good write!

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 10:16:00 AM
    I really loved reading this as the rain is literally pattering over here & the winds are blowing-- hear those leaves too-- I am not kidding! the only thing lacking are the birds since it's 215 in the morning! What a joy to read :) enjoyed this so much & that third line just made me smile ^_^ hugs-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 3:51:00 PM
    sweet build-up to an awesome line 3! Celene! jimbo

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Love-lovely!! : ) The third line is amazing, Celene! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 11:48:00 AM
    Smile ~ Such echoes of peace, happiness & hope painted so very brightly upon this canvas of a hearts beauty; a fave ~ I hope that life is treating "Your Beauty" so very perfectly my dear &, "Extremely Beautiful Poe!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, I see that "Your Treasures" have but another portrait to be viewed my dear; let my eyes go behold "Your Lovely!":) ~

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 11:40:00 AM
    Smile ~ What a very wonderfully soft spoken melody this beautiful love song seems to sing "My Dear, 'Beautiful & Precious, Priceless Tinkerbell!!!'" ~ I was just thinking earlier this morn how one can Always feel the depths of anothers beautiful soul when thus spoken from my dear &, I am once more touched by, "Your Beauty," from inside of this amazingly tender verse ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 10:00:00 AM
    as they dance on the ground. all the rustling a wonderful sound. come to the party and the leaves feel down. while pied piper played his wonderful sounds. john

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 9:47:00 AM
    A gentle, sweet and uplifting image, dear Cuchi. I'm so glad I saw this one today! Love, Carolyn