Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

God is born

A virgin has sired 
        forth God,the sheep praying Him,
Earth racing for Him.

Those not among the sheep
Will hurl a sharp spear at Him.

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 12:46:00 PM

    Very intellectual write. Model piece. I congratulate!

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 11:18:00 PM

    oooohh, I like this one with subtle power beneath... Nicely done!

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 1:29:00 AM

    Son of God born for us! Glad you're a sheep

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 6:48:00 PM

    you have Soup Mail,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 6:46:00 PM

    truly apowerful message within this and obviously honestly honest too,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 9:50:00 AM

    Oooh, what a poignant and powerful ending you have to this nativity scene, Honesty! Excellent tanka for my favorites! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 6:27:00 AM

    It's quite touchy and full of faith Tanka, Honesty

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 4:13:00 AM

    wonderful sublime piece! lovely.. warmest,nette