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Like a God

~                                                  Egyptian Curse                                                 ~

~                                                 the swift air above                                             ~
~                                           heaven drift upon blue sky                                         ~
~                                                like a Cow Goddess                                              ~


~                                                (Ammut~Lin~Ra)                                                 ~

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/14/2011 10:31:00 PM
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    oh, gosh, I already met you and did comment on this one before.I didn't mean anything bad by saying your poem read like haiku. It was a compiment becuase they are both asian forms and so I think it would be good for it to sound like haiku. I am such an addict. someone needs to shoot me because I can't stop coming back when i see comments showing up in my hotmail box. Just be glad I have not posted all the poems I ever wrote. That would take 40 pages iinstead of 10!!BYE

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    kash poet
    Date: 1/14/2011 10:25:00 PM
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    This is a wonderful Haiku Lin-Ra!Enjoyed-thanks a lot for your inspiring words.Don't know how I missed your poems !Nice to read your poems-kashinath
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 1/14/2011 9:52:00 PM
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    wow!....Ammut Lin Ra.....poetic cultural magnificence!!!! jimbo
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    Gert W. Knop
    Date: 1/9/2011 9:20:00 AM
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    Nice tribute to ancient Egyptian Gods, Lin-Ra! Enjoyed the read today!...And thank you for your comment on "Snowfall"...Have a nice week ahead...Gert
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    David Smalling
    Date: 12/27/2010 7:52:00 AM
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    Hathor, cloud like dreams can become anything ... truly only a god has that power. Peace and love.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/29/2010 9:47:00 PM
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    I remember this one and I see my comment below. So I HAVE met you already. I'm the one with the Ghost that Travels Far (the fog poem!) Luv, Andrea
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 11/16/2010 12:21:00 AM
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    Very interesting haiku you have here Ammut Lin Ra-- I do think your choice of words here also gives a sense of gracefulness-- very nice-- nikko :)
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    Royal Trevino
    Date: 11/13/2010 1:36:00 AM
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    To be a goddes means the worship of life. =(^.^)= Royal
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 11/12/2010 1:08:00 PM
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    iI don't understand this one but that is just me. Hope to see more of your writing. Thank you for commenting and letting me find you. Love, joyce
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 11/12/2010 10:53:00 AM
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    cow goddess? hope she can't fly....
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    Sheri Fresonke Harper
    Date: 11/12/2010 10:32:00 AM
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    Cloud watching is a favorite activity for me:)
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/11/2010 4:29:00 AM
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    Interesting turn in this one..Reminds of funny poem that I read years ago..Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/10/2010 3:54:00 PM
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    Very interesting one, Hathor.Why is this an Egyptian curse? Oh, on the Ghost that travels far. It is the personification of something in nature and which occurs once in a while in almost any place. Can you guess what it is?
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 11/10/2010 10:41:00 AM
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    Awesome write Hathor. Welcome to Poetry soup ;)

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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/9/2010 8:14:00 PM
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    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your very creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 11/9/2010 12:31:00 PM
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    What a meaningful thought of Egyptian curse you have penned so well, Hathor