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A Poem About Love

And so did God say: "Let there be light";
Your face did come to be
My heart roared and took flight;
Nothing good was in me

Turned you did
My Heart plummeted;
Meteor earth-bound
Explosion and Eruption;
Oh! What a sound

All of that which was good is gone
And Lost forever more
Lost to this void song
Is the Word upon the shore

A state of mind;
Anger and Rage's boon
Feed mine eyes blind
With your velvet spoon

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  1. Date: 11/9/2010 11:57:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Suhayl. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 11:52:00 AM

    This is a great representation of what everyone is bound to feel. I couldn't better describe the heartache that comes with lost love.