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Train

I am coming, move away
I run majestically
Slow to start, I speed along
where the tracks take me

Some lead me
Some hop on me
Some follow me
Some watch me along
by the sidelines

I am cheered by some
Some throw stones at me
I change tracks as I like
I can fall in danger
I do not fear

Sometimes I reverse
Then move ahead
My time is over it seems
I finally stop

Oh! thought I was the train
I was only a driver
Its time to pave the way
for another to take over.

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  1. Date: 11/9/2010 12:51:00 PM

    Nice analogy of train and the life itself, Nice write, Suresh. Why don't you enter this into the contest of Analoies contest

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 11:50:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Suresh. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 10:13:00 AM

    Hi Suresh.I like this.And yes I fell into the trap you cleverly laid, with your rhythm and the image you conjured up with your words.It was a simple topic that you made fun and a pleasure to read.Thank you. Luv June(sylvia)