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UNSELFISH LOVE

I was blessed to know a woman in my life
Who faced hard times, struggle, and strife.
A Chinese immigrant, she came from a poor town
Lost her husband, was kept from her daughter, but not kept down.

She had three other children who were born here
Getting them a better life was her biggest fear.
She had to fend for herself and them alone you see,
Speaking little of the language in this foreign country.

But, she had always lived a determined life
So she fought back...with a fork and a knife.
She opened a restaurant in a small community
Where her gracious manner made her friends instantly.

Her children would grow up in town with new friends
The restaurant she opened was the mean to her ends.
She worked very hard...sometimes eighteen hours a day
She never complained because that was her way.

Her life's expectations knew more successes sublime
The restaurant grew...one egg roll at a time.
She once told me of the anxiety she felt at the money she'd spent...
Laughing said, "My uncle said sell 2 qts of Chop Suey/Day...you've got the rent."

She was a woman who chose kindness as she felt had to her been shown
To people far and near her generosity was known.
She was thankful that she had the opportunity
To give back with love rather than animosity.

I first met her over some 30 years back
She struck me from the that moment as a person who had the knack
To make others feel at home though strangers they be
She certainly did, because she did it to me.

I still remember her caring for me...it was shown
Once caught in a blizzard, she opened her home.
So often was there a path to this woman's door
Though she stood, less than 5 foot 4.

Her heart was as big and wonderful as one would want
An earthly angel, she was heaven sent.
Though her health began to wane later in life
She never gave in to that world of strife.

Her eyesight began to fail and it was difficult for her to see
But that didn't stop her or her generosity.
She loved people and filled everyone with cheer
Ever thankful that she had had a life here.

Though she is gone I'll never forget her face
Or her love of life, devotion to family, and unstoppable pace.
To me I'll ever be thankful to have had the joy
Of calling her "Ma" ... ONE IN A MILLION~was Connie Moy!

1st Place Winner - "One in a Million" Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/11/2010 5:01:00 PM
    Daniel, a big belated congrats for your place in this contest. Wat a mom you had!! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 9:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 1st Place win Dan in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 10:12:00 PM
    Congrats on your beautiful poem....Karla

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 3:00:00 PM
    Connie Moy had values, ambition and a heart as big as the sky, Daniel! Congratulations on taking the top spot with this top-notch poem. What a pleasure to read this one!! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 2:58:00 PM
    Great work, Daniel. You created a character everyone would love to meet. Congrads on your win. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 8:58:00 AM
    Wow, a well deserved win!! Many congrats, Dan! Have a great weekend! Alles Gute, Gert

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 8:22:00 PM
    A very touching and beautiful write Daniel. Many congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 6:35:00 AM
    Hi Daniel . Congratulations on your success. great work with real feeling. Eamon

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 5:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, Daniel

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 11:42:00 PM
    Daniel.... wonderful piece notching deserved first spot in contest .....some souls strike chord so very easily with others becoz they r endeavoring to connect to others soul not body which most of us erringly do........ Luv/Best wishes always....Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 11:10:00 PM
    What a great tribute of writing a poem in remembering a special person in your life. She is really a one in a million, congratulations on your first place win on this contest, Daniel. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 6:56:00 PM
    A lovely story and well deserved first place. congratulations, Daniel. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 6:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Love Scarlett

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 6:10:00 PM
    I am so moved by this piece, thank you for sharing the memories of such a grand person in your life and congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 6:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on first place with this wonderful poem, this lady certainly did sound like one in a million, very special~~

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 5:35:00 PM
    Just wonderful your love shines through every word, I'd show this to your kids..if you were lucky and have them, show them how proud you are to have loved such a woman! Congrad's on your BIG #1 win! And thanks for all your kind commnets. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 4:39:00 PM
    Congratulations Daniel, on your excceptional poem's honor. Agape, moses

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 4:36:00 PM
    Congratz on your well deserved 1st place

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 4:16:00 PM
    What a beautiful tribute to "Ma", Daniel!! There are angels among us. We don't here of them that often because they go about their kindness, quietly. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win in Linda's Contest! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 3:56:00 PM
    Congrats, Dan. Awesome write. Well deserved win. Outstanding. Ralph

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