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LOVE'S DREAM

I desire to spread my wings, Soar over all the earth, Seeking out pain, misery, hurt and fear. Then descending as a dove, Bring Peace and Hope. And so stem the rising flood Of man's inhumanity to man.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2010 10:42:00 AM

    It would be a beautiful sight watching the dove absorb mans hate, and allow it to dicipate through it's soul >> James :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 4:43:00 AM

    This is a beautiful poem,I enjoyed it very much.Thank you for your comments,I agree we could learn more if we took a step back to doing things more simply.I've always liked the history behind the Indian culture.If you like the music there is a song you can find on youtube called "Return to Innocence" by Enigma I think you might like.

  1. Date: 11/7/2010 8:30:00 AM

    If you can find a way to reverse man's inhumanity to man, you will have succeeded where so many have failed, Sylvia. I love the optimism and hope this poem inspires in readers. Motivates us all to try and make a difference. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/7/2010 4:07:00 AM

    through the sweet lines i enjoy the beauty of the mind,friend.

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 9:19:00 PM

    wonderful words here my friend duncan

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 7:21:00 PM

    A lovely notion, Sylvia! Excellent Free Verse.

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 6:46:00 PM

    June, enjoyed reading your work today and thanks for commenting on my work!

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 6:19:00 PM

    Such a lovely message of hope, conveyed in this beautiful poem....if only we could heal the world, as a dove of peace....if only..... those two words are so powerful...if only....

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 3:38:00 PM

    Very inspiring and uplifting thought to remove pain, misery, hurt and fear and to bring peace and hope. enjoyed , Sylvia

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 12:33:00 PM

    Powerful thoughts shared in this deep write..Bravo my poet friend...

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 12:09:00 PM

    lovely thoughts

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 11:08:00 AM

    We all should aspire to this dream Sylvia and soar above our differences. Awesome write ;) Wilma