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Freefall

Freefall
Bungee cord secure;
My eyes saccade below me,
Screaming as I plunge.

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  1. Date: 11/6/2010 6:43:00 AM

    Brave, brave girl, I would never have the courage to do a freefall, and your poem certainly captured that moment of the plunge, well done~~

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 5:46:00 AM

    Very thoughtful and meaningful Senryu...Screaming as I plunge.. nice expression, Marie