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Below is the poem entitled FLIGHT TO DUBAI which was written by poet FABIYAS M V. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Clouded farewell pains;
Hopes from pauperism did flee;
And took off from Kochin air base.
Mr.Jas , bucolic purely,
Landed in Dubai, as in heaven.

Mummies of Arabian culture in museums;
Building striving to kiss the moonlet;
Marvellous lights
In the street,
Luring as the first smile of a lover………..

Mirth floating creek;
Date bunches, fresh as virgins;
Pleasure selling girls exotic;
Beach with beauties chainless……………
Mr.Jas does spree after each day’s toil.

Soon an Indian air-craft
The mind boarded;
Body followed it within fortnight;
Concentration camp of insolvency Mr.Jas returned.

“Great is Dubai with its fame;
Greater is the goal;
But the greatest is warmth of home,
Rebounding always.”


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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Good morning Fab ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * SKAt

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Fab congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)

  1. Date: 12/28/2010 7:48:00 AM
    Date bunches, fresh as virgins; - very original character, my American friend. Undoubtedly the most heat in the houses, but where is home to the poor?

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 5:40:00 PM
    This is great!

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 9:36:00 AM
    Hi.Great words well crafted and a joy to read. Thank you. Eamon

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 8:07:00 AM
    This is a very interesting account of Mr. Jas and the the way his day goes in Dubai, Fabiyas. The line about the "concentration camp of insolvency" describes the economy of many nations now. We are all hoping for the "rebounding" to occur. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 6:33:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading today. Thank you for the nice comments. Love Scarlett

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 2:58:00 PM
    Great play on words ... Thank you 4 being heard verse ) Mr Jas is on the go feathers flapping no no no Are the mummies Alantean Don

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 1:38:00 PM
    I think most Mummies will be rotating in their Sarcophagus' being called Arabs!

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 9:08:00 AM
    Wonderful write full of creativity FABIYAS .. all that was missing were the magnificent steeds that run in our races here in America which I luv to watch the entries from Dubaiand the proud sheiks that own those thoroughbreds..luv..

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 9:00:00 AM
    I LIKE it greatly,especially the philosophy in the last stanza

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 8:05:00 AM
    Another beautiful write my poet friend...