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An "Ok"

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An "Ok"

I’m sitting alone one night
Trying to write you a letter
To tell you how I feel inside
Hoping it would make you treat me better

I wrote and wrote
All I had in mind
And whatever was in my heart

I should have been smart, knowing you wouldn’t care
I still sent it unconsciously, since I was in despair

I still got a simple cold “Ok”
You will regret this trust me
I want you to remember this one day

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