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Please My Love

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Please My Love

Please don’t go love,
Please don’t walk out that door
I can’t bear to see you walk away
From our love that has grown
These tears… these tears…
I just can’t stop crying
Please… please I beg you love
Inside I am but dyeing…
My heart feels shattered
Can’t seem to breathe
My mind is going crazy
My love…. It’s you I need
Here I kneel, pleading
That you let me back in
Please… this time I’ll change,
From outside and within
I am but falling…
Stumbling over the hurt
Why did you leave me here…
Why kick me to the curve
Why leave me with this pain
This unbearable fear
That my life will fall apart
And you don’t really care
I can’t take it, I just can’t
My life now doesn’t seem right
Guess this is good bye
No other choice but to end my life!!!

Goodbye…. My… love………………………….

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  1. Date: 11/2/2010 5:00:00 PM
    Wow to give away your "power" to another like this is as you can see very dangerous. The core of you must be kept for you! BIG HUGS! Ligfht & Love

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 8:09:00 PM
    Felipe, I hope this is not real!? Here comes a new day..Tuesday or...Wednesday..who knows you just meet someone the meantime look within to see if there needs to be a change....Best wishes to you and nothing and no one is worth ending your precious life for..they will just cry for a day maybe, and move have so much to do, m friend! God bless you. Always, Audrey