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In Love

In Love
                       

a tender kiss
lips pledging
perpetuity 
intensely sealed

a soft caress
tingling sensations
screaming inside and out
lingers on lasting

a fire burns
unrestrained exhilaration
emotions impatient
ceaseless illimitable


© Chuck Keys. 2010.  All Rights Reserved

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  1. Date: 11/13/2010 1:13:00 AM

    oo love it chuck, this is different from all your writes,, enjoyed. See your not on here much,,just got back my self,,took a 3 week vacation,, now i will comment like never before,,lol,,kidding,, *p.s.* I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 4:59:00 PM

    very passionate dear poet...I just know that this being my last read tonight...my dreams will be filled with LOVE ! *smiles* Great thought here ! james

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 10:11:00 PM

    This is a passionate poem and very interesting to read ,this kind is!! thanks for your comment to me. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 2:07:00 PM

    really enjoyable i especially, like the line lingers on lasting.

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 10:37:00 AM

    Reads like a very passionate romance..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..The cats survived and so did I even though my cholesterol is probably high...Sara

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 9:55:00 AM

    Very romantic!Celene.

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 9:32:00 AM

    Very emotional poem on the feelings of love, Chuck

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 8:21:00 AM

    Chuck u have captured a few of the very best emotions luv brings to the lovers.. enjoyed these lines so scintillating this Monday morning.. to begin my hour of reading ..thankxx with luv..