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The Evening Breeze

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The Evening Breeze

Often , I lie alone
On the white sand-banks
Of a large pond
In my ancestral land,
When the evening breeze
Gently touches the divinity,
Hidden somewhere in the mortal body:
I feel I cannot normally feel.

Oh! I wish the evening breeze,
Too heavenly and wondrous,
Brought out my grandmother
Sleeping just under,
With whom I used to enjoy the breeze,
On these white sands,
In green days, later became defoliate!
Indeed , it can if it willed.

The evening breeze brings
The smell of soap suds,
Which forms on my mind-board
A damsel in the nude.
Soon, the breeze brings
The holiest odor
Of  incense that smolders.
So I sin  and purge in the breeze.

Often, I lie tired on the sands;
All sweat drops dry in the evening breeze.
My spirit revives,
And I wait a fresh morrow.
The evening chants of diverse creeds
Unite in the evening breeze.
The seraphic breeze pats on every head,
Still, nobody sees it.


(The evening breeze, so sweet,brings different smells from the houses in our village.This time, the people belonging to different religions pray.)

Contest :your own favorite poem
Sponsor:Debbie Guzzie          2nd place winner
FABIYAS M V

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:02:00 PM

    Hi Fab, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:22:00 PM

    Vivid and evocative! Congrats on your poem placing in the contest! Ngoc.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Congrats on your win in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Congrats with your well deserved win,Fabiyas..Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:18:00 AM

    FAB... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 8:37:00 AM

    An amazing work! Great write, Fabiyas! Congratulations on your winning in PD's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Always a winner!! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 5:59:00 PM

    A great piece my dear friend. Congrats. Luv n hugs. Michael.

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 4:58:00 PM

    way to go Fabiyas .. another excellent win for a fabulous write luv..

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:34:00 AM

    The heavenly evening breeze touches in depth in mortal body enjoyed. Really it's a beautiful poem. Loved and congrats on your win my friend,bl

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:18:00 PM

    Your whispers in the evening breeze a perfection, congrats. on your win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Fabiyas! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Congratulations Fabiyas on a great write. :) Jon

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:19:00 PM

    congrats Fabiyas on a sensational second place win for this elegant entry my friend.. such fantastic lines of imagery luv..

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Strong theme here, Fabiyas. "So I sin and purge in the breeze." Such a great, meaningful line to reinforce the overall imagery. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations Fabiyas, nice one x

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Congratulations Fabiyas. I had not had the pleasure of reading this one before. Great job

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Congrats, Fabiyas, Beautiful piece. Excellent. Well deserved win. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:59:00 AM

    So wonderful to be with you in this exotic place again..some day maybe I will get there? Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 6:12:00 PM

    i would enter this one in the poetry soup contest! excellent work! l & l

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Frank's "What Turns You On"contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 5:39:00 PM

    Congrats Fabiyas on a superb win for second place luv.. honored to share luv..

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 2:25:00 PM

    Just lovely Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 9:08:00 PM

    My congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 6:35:00 PM

    A winning congratulations! Caryl

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 3:15:00 PM

    Congrats FABIYAS on your FANTASTIC win with this true treasured poetry luv..enjoy my friend..

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Fabiyas. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 8:11:00 AM

    Hello Fabiyas, This is so very lovely, I have never been to your country-perhaps some day I will go. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poetry. As Always, Shar

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