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Coin With the Same Face on Both Sides

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Coin With the Same Face on Both Sides

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                                Once again the coin has been tossed
                                to choose between just dirt and dross
                                Insults from ridge to ridge
                                on how to build a bridge
                                in town without river to cross




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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:06:00 PM

    I think this is beautiful in a very natural and understated way. Near sublime. Favorite

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:14:00 PM

    wow! That is a lot of views for a limerick... LOL.. My limericks get under 700 viewers or so.. ... Here I am announcing myself as the 80th commentER of this poem. he he he! After reading this one again. I see why this one comes with the most view... it's called "POLITICS MAN" lol.. I know exactly what you mean, we the voter... I have everyone pulling my arms, to vote.. you'll never guess who I'm going for!!! xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Nicely written. Now we are UP the river.

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:45:00 AM

    A great limerick, Ruben, ..Congrats..:) Jag

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 8:31:00 PM

    cheers to you for this splendid win and the many others awards, ruben.. go for gold!... happiness and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great limerick and win!!! Terry

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Nathan's "Limerick Race" contest Ruben. What an eye waking write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:13:00 AM

    Great one Ruben O! Sounds like the same kind of local politics as we got down here in LA...mine was in Cajun English dialect which is pretty hard to decipher (no plurals, everything singular,etc) Congratulations my friend!

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:45:00 AM

    Ruben huge congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:22:00 AM

    Big Congrats Ruben xx

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 9:32:00 PM

    hahaha, I think one of the funniest on the list perhaps. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Good one - congrats.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:56:00 PM

    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Ugh....another BRIDGE TO NO WHERE?....Will they ever stop milking us for money...Just got lint in my pockets now! Congrats Ruben! GWendolen

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:30:00 PM

    RUBEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN,,, XOX~PD

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 10:17:00 AM

    Love the sarcasm politics just brings out naturally. Good write.

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 12:55:00 AM

    love that part about no river... so apt somehow when it comes to politic. wonderful poem, Ruben

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:35:00 AM

    Ruben ,,have i told you how nice it is to have you here on the site... about my game..I will give you my challenge... and you can complete it. When ever posible.. i will send you soup mail...always..pd

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 12:27:00 PM

    I love these political rants and yours is right up there. So nice I found you! :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 11:09:00 PM

    OUCH!! Someone likes to stir up great discussion with a GREAT POLITICAL POEM!! Oh, how much fun!! That bridge to no where is gonna help someone out there win an election...it just depends on how strong they can prove the necessity of such an invisible thing. lol. Gwendolen ps..glad u liked my tanka entry. It was about my grandma. :0 She has passed on.

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:56:00 PM

    hahaha, just rereading this one and it really struck me as funny on the last line this time. gosh, I just noticed I have been to this one so many times. I wonder if there is one of yours I have not ever seen?? (I'm not looking at any of my tanka entries . I love seeing them blind!!) Otherwise,I'd go see THAT one.

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Just dropping by to say hi! I saw you comment on Chris's blog today, and it made me smile to see your name! Your humor and kindness has been sorely missed. Hope all is going well, dear Ruben!! Wow....do I miss some of my favorite people who have moved on! you are on the top of my list! :) Take care!

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 12:06:00 PM

    i must say Rueben i rather fancy this poem. it strikes me like a good sarcastic comment.

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 2:27:00 PM

    Reuben, where are you my friend I have missed you so much!! Need some of your great creativeness to inspire my jello brain. again!!

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 1:09:00 AM

    I like. Hope you are doing ok

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 4:27:00 PM

    Just dropping by to ask where the heck you have gone to??

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 7:57:00 AM

    Happy Birthday to you,Happy Birthday to you,Happy Birthday dear Ruben,Happy Birthday to you . .Now you're 40 plus,ooOPPs. .i mean, sixteen plus :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 5:41:00 PM

    Hey Rueben. I took NIkko's inner animal test and found out you were a leopord. WEll, I am a jaguar and Frank is a Cougar. WE three be cool cats!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2010 12:54:00 PM

    s.m reply

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 6:53:00 AM

    Ruben don't let the insults stop your poetic creations.....water off a ducks back!! You are most talented and hope you are having a great holiday!

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