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Mercy's obsession

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Mercy's obsession

A FEATURED POEM (07/11/2010)

    MERCY'S OBSESSION:
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Mercy's obsession is how to give a solution
To he who prays to be her possession.
She needs a decision,
All she is in now is confusion,
But i bet this is nothing of delusion.
I wish she come to a steady conclusion,
So she, i and all will be aware the love's
Pleasant request is a thing of predestination.
And she shall occupy my emotions,
Her sweet sensations shall enjoy every
Little, large moment of my elegant
Declarations.

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  1. Date: 9/29/2011 1:52:00 PM
    Beautiful L.I.. really Lovely...smiles...chiquita

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 4:45:00 AM
    thanks cayton

  1. Date: 11/25/2010 7:11:00 PM
    I started at your first poem. Very nice one. I really liked your comment on my work so I hope to visit more of yours as time permits. Enjoy this festive time! Good work at expressing yourself so very well in verse. Cindy

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 11:47:00 AM
    thanks every body, i give God the glory for i am only a serving vessel.

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 10:15:00 AM
    You have a featured poem today on the home page!! Great work!

  1. Date: 11/1/2010 9:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Charles. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 8:38:00 PM
    Congrats Charles on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to share with us all ..today with luv..

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 4:00:00 PM
    This is such a romantic write. I like love poems and this one is great. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 1:42:00 PM
    Such a romantic and blissful poem of love. Another winner, Charles! :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:54:00 PM
    I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Charles. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work!! ~~~~~###*###~~~~~~~ Shadows of creativeness are pure bliss Compute the phrases into poetic verse and lines Thoughts are dancing in the shadows Lazy thoughts quicken my resting senses.