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TWINSOULS' ABIDING REQUEST

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TWINSOULS' ABIDING REQUEST

l.  it was seven octobers of knowing you
through refrains of musk earth and rosette skies ,
we lay with hands outstretched 
under a family of flowering trees
riddled with moonlit pearls
feasting on legs entwined, laughing at shared tears.

we were everywhere,
between the falling of leaves and rising of our gazes,
the twilight fondling our fragrant tresses sweet

ll.  and so it is,
at some  absent place, at some  errant time
with strains of  our song “lost in space”,
you dashing off with your shoestrings
that meant , “maybe, i no longer care”…
yet, those screeches of madness turned 
to wrapping of hands in prayer,
the midnights dark with rattling trees and shared tears

lll.  and still, , deep upon our soul's abiding request
we blazed our torches rafting with angels’ praise 
through refrains of musk earth and rosette skies,
we vow to sacred, godly rites
that flames in the wilderness will never cry.
yellow roses upon my feet, goddess of dawn
and saint of peace,
there is a lifetime of octobers gathering budding seeds,
if we feel that what is, 
can be golden discovery weekends indeed.


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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:41:00 PM
    Hi Nette! Congratulations on your amazing poem featured this week on Soup! Luv, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Hi Nette, hope your days are filled with joy... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:48:00 AM
    "The twilight fondling our fragrant tresses sweet" What a gift you have for tripping the emotions of the reader with but a few words. "There is a lifetime of octobers gathering budding seeds." A real mind stretcher. Congrats on this outstanding write being selected. daver

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 11:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Nette. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:34:00 AM
    so pleased to share the citation wioth you, dr, ram! thank you...

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:33:00 AM
    so blessed to have your cheers on this one , carolyn.. yes, 50th is a celebration, indeed.. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:31:00 AM
    how nice of you to send me cheers on this one, linda-marie.. may you always amaze me with your offerings! warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:29:00 AM
    thanks for te compliment, michael... more shining poetic pens for you. warmest, nette

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 7:56:00 AM
    Nette, I am pleased to see this wonderful poem placed in Frank's contest! Your faith shines in this write, imagery is incredible and I do hope you and your soul mate have many years with "Octobers gathering budding seeds." Lovely! Congratulations, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 5:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, nette

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 5:47:00 AM
    Congrats Nette on your HM in the Love Story contest with this lovely write and excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another special honor all your own with luv..

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 5:08:00 AM
    Strong write in this well deserved placement in contest...I really liked this... Michael

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 10:56:00 AM
    beautiful entry, best of luck