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Winter Poems I

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Winter Poems I

Tonight
the street is full of poems
hanging, shimmering
frozen petals in the air

He who dares to pick one
makes no imprint in the holy snow.


©2010.10.


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I would love it if Soupers could give me some critical feedback. I don't even mind very very strong critiques as long as they're constructive. I'm always encouraged by all the positive comments you all give me, but I think it's time to upgrade my writing skills. ;) So come on and take my poem to pieces, people! :D

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  1. Date: 10/26/2010 11:24:00 AM
    Grace how do one critique something you like? I love this piece ;) thanks for your comment today ;)

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 5:45:00 AM
    it is great to me!! LOVE it!