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  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:10:00 AM
    magical, mysterious, sexual..[The hungry stomachs boors owned...what do you mean what is boor? or boored?] Bring this into the present tense and it will be even stronger. Light & Love

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    Date: 11/11/2011 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie for close reading and wise suggestion.It is done.
  1. Date: 11/10/2010 11:09:00 AM
    Hey Fabiyus! An interesting write, indeed. Much seems to be happening here, and I can only grasp some of its intensity. Though they lay 'silent in the basket', I'm sure they'd have many tales the tell. I did add more to this comment, but it has nothing to do with neither here nor there. I do wonder though, if black pearls would come from black oysters? Best regards to you! Mikki

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 9:29:00 PM
    Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 11:51:00 AM
    May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry and thank you for sharing it Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 6:53:00 AM
    Powerful presentation luv.. enjoyed your creative theme today and appreciate your sweet comments on my poetry as well ..luv..

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 6:07:00 AM
    different story... where are you from? Is this like a fable? Never heard of these...

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 1:30:00 AM
    this is a very interesting poem, enjoyed. Harry