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Respite

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Below is the poem entitled Respite which was written by poet Ely Ayson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Respite

Focused, brows furrowed
Working, toiling, laboring
Then, my child awakes.

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  1. Date: 10/29/2010 4:28:00 AM
    excellent peace here my friend

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 2:35:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ely. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 9:50:00 PM
    Very interesting way to describe the child at sleep, Ely. I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 10:19:00 AM
    Nice Senryu with great images, Ely