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I didn't go wrong

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I didn't go wrong

I can’t remember, what it’s like to feel strong
I asked you, and you answered, you said I went wrong

I know I didn’t, and you weren’t right
I still think its stupid, how we ended it with a fight

Its time for me to let you go, maybe we’re not meant to be
But deep down you should know
You simply meant everything to me

We fought and argued, there was no use
You just always had, another excuse

We’re losing each other, this feeling inside of me
It feels like I’m never going to be free

I might’ve hurt you once or twice
But dear you’ve hurt me so many times
And now I’m stuck making up these rhymes 

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