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A song

wind rain 
Original music spun twilight
Dreams given

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  1. Date: 10/22/2010 1:22:00 PM

    Interesting use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 6:46:00 PM

    Oh, I really like the mood this modern haiku sets, Randall. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 3:09:00 PM

    I can hear and see the scene..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 3:03:00 PM

    Randall, This is a remarkable Haiku! I feel it and I love it.......... As Always, Shar