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Proof

No words can describe, how I feel inside
Want proof? Without you I would’ve died

I ran, flew and would never hide
From a love like yours, every rule I’ll abide
I’ll stand with you, side by side

Listen to my favorite song; you know how much I’m hung?
With your love and touch, I miss you so much

You spin my head right round 
Whenever I see you around; I stop and stare
From all the world, harm from only you I can bare

I would die for you, I swear I will
Within my heart, this promise will always be still

A proof you wanted and a proof you will own
I love you forever, but I can’t love alone 
So promise you will love me, and let me be known

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  1. Date: 10/20/2010 2:14:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today .... and its creative theme... hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members...good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 5:43:00 PM
    wonderful write here my friend thank you duncan

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:38:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:31:00 AM
    Very passionate write on the feelings of love, Dana