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Chances, or how to be a complete idiot at 4am after you've had a few beers.

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Chances, or how to be a complete idiot at 4am after you've had a few beers.

the moon it never rises except when i go to sleep
and the sun it never sets except when i sit and weep
yet i long for you i ache for you my life seems incomplete
so i lie in bed and curse and moan underneath the sheets

it cuts me deep it cuts me hard
and it only gets harder as time advances
so i stand outside in your yard
and take all my chances


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  1. Date: 3/13/2011 8:24:00 PM
    You had better start looking for other women. This is decently descriptive.

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 1:56:00 PM
    lol cute, for taking that chance, enjoyed,..P.D.

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 5:05:00 AM
    yep that is a true heartfelt idiot/stalker....LOL

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 4:58:00 AM
    Very depressive thoughts on the loneliness and yearning for romance, Daniel

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 9:39:00 PM
    love it, especially the title