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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/2/2011 5:58:00 PM
What a work! Seems like a whole play! It also reminded me of an old old song I think called Twa Corbies...congrad's on your sucess moving forward as always your friend. Light & Love
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/2/2011 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Amaan. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
SYLVIA Coulstock
Date: 4/10/2011 10:59:00 AM
Hi Syed-Ilike the way you have taken us back in time with this skilfully written piece.Definitely worthy of being placed among the winners.Congratulations.Luv June(Sylvia)
Vince Suzadail Jr.
Date: 3/31/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Syed on your poem being among the winners. Vince
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/31/2011 1:36:00 PM
Syed, Congratulations on your win in the Soup contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/31/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week.. Sara
Elaine George
Date: 3/31/2011 5:50:00 AM
Incredible! Many congrats on your win in the Nove Poetrysoup competition, Syed. Elaine
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/30/2011 2:00:00 PM
A valent write! Like Cerno wooing his lady! So glad you won! Congrad's Light & Love
Annalise Brigham
Date: 3/30/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing win in PS's Intl. Contest, Amaan! Hope all is well!Always, Annalise
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/30/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Syed
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/30/2011 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Amaan. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol
Joyce Johnson
Date: 3/29/2011 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. lEnjoy the honor. A great love poem. Love, joyce
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/28/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Amaan. Love, Carol
Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/10/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congrats on three of your poems winning the first round - a tribute to your talents. Wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad
Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations ...Sara
Matthew Chambers
Date: 12/16/2010 2:28:00 PM
I aspire to write a poem this good!! What I liked the most about it, was that the "lover" in the poem could represen many different things. To me it seemed like the "lover" in this poem was death...which is why he reffered to his elegant carriage. Just a guess?? :) Brilliant work!!
Adeleke Adeite
Date: 12/16/2010 1:55:00 AM
great piece! congrats on having your wonderful piece being featured this week, hope you have many more interesting features. keep you pen writing. great you Syed! Love always, Adeleke
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 12/14/2010 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Amaan. Love, Carol
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/12/2010 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Amaan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv my friend..
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/16/2010 12:23:00 PM
Awesome write you created a masterpiece. God Bless Phyl
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/16/2010 10:44:00 AM
Absolutely Outstanding poetry to be reading this Saturday Amaan. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2010 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment on my poetry, Sir, I would kiss your hand if you were not all the way in India, and your poem Amaan is a masterpiece in writing, each word, each line, just perfect, if Shakespeare were here, he would shake your hand and call you friend and poet ~~
Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/15/2010 2:59:00 PM
Very old English seemingly ...Must have great patience to pen one like this..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/15/2010 2:51:00 PM
A magnificent epic, Syed. Your use of old English is an inspiration to all who have tried to write for Deborah Guzzi's English Sonnet contest. I love the story and the way the words flow. Love, Carolyn
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 10/15/2010 2:48:00 PM
Very awesome and intellectual write well worded with nice imagery, Syed
Nate D.
Date: 10/15/2010 1:14:00 PM
a very unique write and poem.. cool'
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 10/15/2010 1:01:00 PM
Now don't forget to go check out my blog and see the Halloween costume I wore last year which won first prize as the devil/angel combo.. can't see my black feather wings and pitchfork but they are behind my hubby in the wizard outfit..luv..happy weekend...
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 10/15/2010 12:59:00 PM
Don't be scared Amaan I will protect u luv..haha.. anyone who writes great poetry as u have penned this piece is unafraid of anything..this is so brilliant and so enthralling in its content luv.. enjoyed your creativity today ... as always your "Sweetheart"
