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Epitaph

she was but 
a whisp of breeze
but caressed within her words
is a love of humanity

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  1. Date: 12/31/2010 2:55:00 PM

    You carve on my mind with words. Hey, Jane come back and write again ... your poetry is too beautiful to miss. Happy new year to you too.

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 3:33:00 PM

    Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 3:29:00 PM

    Wow this piece is a well deserved win, meticulously marvelous

  1. Date: 11/5/2010 5:50:00 PM

    Jayne, just saying thnx for reading and the comments on my writes...Always appreciated...JA

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 12:59:00 PM

    The way it should be ....... great Epitaph! Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 10/27/2010 4:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this excellent work...Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 10:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Jayne. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 9:06:00 AM

    Congrats Jayne on your HM in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph and great words to enter in the contest... enjoy your special honor luv..

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 6:56:00 AM

    I thought this was one of the best, Jayne. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 6:13:00 AM

    this is so profound. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Harry

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 5:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on this well deserved HM, Jayne

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 5:25:00 AM

    Congrats, Jayne. Great write. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 4:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM with this beautiful epitaph Jayne :) Wilma

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 3:44:00 AM

    congrats on HM in contest .....luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 10:35:00 PM

    Beautiful message, Jayne! Congrats on your placing in Andrea's Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 10:22:00 PM

    this sure is beautiful, Jayne! wonderful message you have here-- congrats! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:39:00 PM

    Jayne, this one was beautiful. Sorry I never noticed the first time I saw this that your name was not on it. Otherwise, I am sure it would have placed even higher. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 9:24:00 PM

    lovely entry for the contest , congrats on your HM

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:49:00 PM

    Hey, I have not gotten around to seeing most of my entries yet, but this is very nice if it's in my contest! Good luck. I have no idea how I will be able to judge that one (I keep putting it off for that reason.haha) luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/18/2010 4:51:00 AM

    So beautiful Jane!Celene

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 7:12:00 AM

    Amazing!!!! The best to you in the contest Jayne. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 6:05:00 AM

    very very nice well done good luck in yhe contest with this wonderful write have a great weekend and thanks for your comments faleshia

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:24:00 AM

    this is lovely, Harry

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 3:42:00 PM

    Very nicely worded and expressed epitaph, Jayne

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 12:03:00 PM

    oh very lovely! good luck Take care~Deb

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 8:28:00 AM

    Excellent Jayne.. a great Epitaph and good luck in the contest.. simple and sweet ..us blondies have to stick together luv... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry as well..

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 7:46:00 AM

    You really sound like a lovely person in this epitaph, Jayne. Wish we could all be remembered for a love for humanity. Best wishes in the contest. (Great contest idea, eh?) Love, Carolyn