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asters in her hair

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asters in her hair

asters in her hair
and wearing a hint of blush-
September strolls in. . . .
crooning melancholy strains 
she bids adieu to summer.

October follows-
whimsical and ruddy-cheeked. . . .
sometimes blowing in
she brightly draws attention 
then exits quite eerily

following sulking
in her sister’s faded gown
November arrives -
stepping lively at the time
of harvest’s celebration


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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:28:00 AM

    My warmest congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Andrea! Excellent write as always! Have a nice weekend! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:34:00 PM

    CCoonnggrraattuullaattiioonnss....ahhhh you figure it out... They're both great... Love ya, Love ya.... Jake Jake

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:59:00 PM

    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Congrats my friend on your win. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 7:23:00 AM

    congrats on your win with this lovely piece Andrea..

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:04:00 AM

    I like the mood of this one. Congrats

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:58:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea......how did you manage to enter 2 poems in ths contest. Lol i must say congrats twice to you....Seren

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:12:00 PM

    ANDREA.... congratulations... from:Linda

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 12:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Debbie, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 9:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Andrea in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:07:00 AM

    it is a great poem. congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 7:00:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea my friend on another great win in the Japanese contest .. a super cool write .. check out my new blog today..explains much..luv..

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 12:44:00 AM

    an array of radiant tankas, andrea... super cheesr for the big win! :) hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 9:06:00 PM

    Many congrats Andrea on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 7:58:00 PM

    Such lovely personification of seasons. many congrats.

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 5:26:00 PM

    Terrific as usual..I love this one. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 4:04:00 PM

    Such clever writing...almost as three sisters !! Congratulations, Andrea!

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 1:21:00 PM

    Charming write Andie thanks so much for adding the beauty of your pen to the contest! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 10:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's contest! A fine string of tanka full of personification and interesting cuts~Chris

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 10:31:00 AM

    Another beauty from you Andrea!!Congrats on your big win----kash

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 1:45:00 PM

    I think ---asters in her hair.... is fine as the title Light & Love [change back later Andie]

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 8:31:00 AM

    aack are you still here? better check your email asap ok?? about radio show!! :) hugs I am off to sleep zzzzz hugs!

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 12:25:00 PM

    Nice work. It's time for another Thanksgiving soon. There are things to be thankful for. I am sure yo have some. Love & Peace Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 6:02:00 AM

    Excellent imagery tone and flow throughout this lovely write. Andrea it is a pleasure to have read for you. Thank you for sharing and for your most welcomed comments on my poem :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 3:00:00 AM

    This is a seasonal beauty Andrea, you are my style of poet, very imaginitive, inventive, another winner if ever I saw one, many thanks for displaying this one, it's a real treat! By the way, I don't know If you have a game called 'Bingo' over there, but that's where the expression comes from. hicky

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 7:21:00 AM

    Hi Andrea! Haven't been much on Soup lately due to my visitors! Very nicely expressed Tankas you are presenting here! Enjoyed the read! And thank you for commenting "December Snow"...Have a great weekend!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 10/21/2010 1:50:00 PM

    This is just a terrific read.My mom had 3 boys born in the summer a 4 girls born in the fall and she called us the autumn sisters cause we all had different red hair.Thanks for your kind and thoughtful comment Andrea.Teresa

  1. Date: 10/21/2010 10:57:00 AM

    This is a nice seasonal theme . I like your title too. God Bless Phyl

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