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Special Girl

Special Girl There is this Special Girl, She makes my head twirl, I’ll love her all the time, I wish she would be mine, I would hold her in my arms, And show her all my charms, I would bend over backwards for her, If anything were to occur, I would write her a letter, To try and know her better, I would give her a rose, And then get close, I would give her a kiss, I know I won’t miss, She looks like an Angel, From any angle, I see her in my dreams, I think I know what that means, When I hold her tight, I think “Gee she’s a beautiful sight” I would do anything to make her happy, So I would be like by her pappy, She has that special touch, That’s one of the reasons I love her so much, She’s smoother that a dove, I know I in love, When I’m around her I get so sigh, If she left me I’d probably die, So when I die, I’ll be in the sky, Looking down making sure she finds the right guy, When she finds him, He better treat her with respect, And if he doesn’t, I’ll send a lightning bolt to his neck, She better get all the love in the world, Because she’s my Special Girl, I’m not playing games, So I won’t name any names, This is how my Special Girl would be treated, And I’m not going to repeat it...

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  1. Date: 10/14/2010 7:37:00 PM

    Raymond, wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad to go through all them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( I"M NOT GOING TO REPEAT IT ) I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 2:14:00 PM

    Thank you my friend....And welcome to Soup!! I love your first write and look forward to more.....Michael

  1. Date: 10/12/2010 11:58:00 AM

    Thank you all for your encouragement! I've always wanted to sign up for one of these sites just was always afraid... Then a special someone gave me the confidence and encouragement i needed to proceed... Thx M :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2010 8:32:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write today.. hope u will check out the many contests offered to new members ..good luck with luv...

  1. Date: 10/12/2010 6:30:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Raymond. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 10:17:00 PM

    well, you sure love that specail girl, Raymond, Keep up your poetic spirit! welcome to Soup. LUv, Andrea