A Struggle to Behave by SYLVIA Coulstock


daver austin Date: 9/25/2012 1:27:00 PM I'd call you degenerate, but that would also apply to me. Congrats on this selection. daver
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/23/2010 2:25:00 PM Well said Sylvia, I'm not a fan of any kinds of sports,, well Dallas cowboys perhaps.. But as far as wrestling,, can't seem to find the interest in there at all. Sure enjoyed your poem,, By the way,I'm also here to say,, how i love the comments you leave me or any others poet, I enjoy the honest opinion you have 4 all of us.. Also your words are so inspiring,, Thanks always,, have a blessed day,..p.d
duncan ceizar chappell Date: 11/6/2010 9:27:00 PM nice peace
Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2010 12:37:00 PM Great Limerick..My father always enjoyed wrestling matches on TV...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for reading my work..Yes, Swans mate for life and if their mate dies they grieve just like people ....The only way they separate from the mate they have chosen is that for some reason they don't produce offsprings then rarely they will separate..Great Limerick..Sara
James Fraser Date: 10/17/2010 1:43:00 PM Haha, I can just picture you at the ringside battering Mick McManus, Giant Haystacks ans all the other baddies >> James :)
Joyce Johnson Date: 10/15/2010 10:42:00 PM To each her own. Good limerick. Love, Joyce
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2010 8:43:00 PM Oh, Sylvia (or are you the one, June?) My memory is so bad. Anyway, I used to love watching the guys wrestle in high school. what a turn on sport. haha. LUv, Andrea
John Summers Date: 10/13/2010 4:42:00 PM Great limerick, congrats on the win. and thanks for reading mine. John
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/12/2010 11:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win Sylvia in Linda-Marie's contest "Let's Limerick". Love, Carol
john freeman Date: 10/12/2010 8:11:00 AM Congratulations Sylvia on your poem's top ten win. Agape, Moses
Hitendra Mehta Date: 10/12/2010 5:15:00 AM congrats on win..... Luv/best wishes ... Hitendra Mehta
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/12/2010 3:13:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Sylvia
Francine Roberts Date: 10/11/2010 11:26:00 PM great entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 10/11/2010 9:04:00 PM Congrats Sylvia on your success in my Limerick contest with this awesome entry luv.. appreciate your support with luv..
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/11/2010 4:14:00 PM Mud wrestling perhaps, Sylvia? Very cute llimerick. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 10/11/2010 1:45:00 PM I would be suprised if this is not the winner. Nice one girl. Sorry for the Flo limerick. it hit me and I had to do it. I have an excuse, the voices told me to do it
Vicki Acquah Date: 10/11/2010 5:13:00 AM OOOH Sylvia wrestling lol ...uh huh! Nice write tho! Just wanted to tell you thanks.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2010 5:04:00 PM Sylvia. I would so love to see this one place. A small suggestion. think of a word to rhyme with getter and better (maybe sweater?) and work it into the end of line one! then it will be closer to true limerick form! (oops, was it June you name?) LUv, Andrea (how about, I'm not one to wear a sports sweater?)
doreen cyr Date: 10/10/2010 3:16:00 PM You and my hubby would get along well, lol I really enjoy your humor and you get your point across with so few words. very well done. Thank you for your comments on my write I can't enter the challenge with it as not a sonnet, but thought would post anyway doreen
Deb Wilson Date: 10/10/2010 2:45:00 PM wrestling IS fun to watch..good luck..Take care~Deb
Caryl Muzzey Date: 10/10/2010 11:42:00 AM A different choice to add flavor to the contest, I liked reading this wonderful Limerick. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
duncan ceizar chappell Date: 10/10/2010 11:40:00 AM like it thank you my friend [duncan]
Francine Roberts Date: 10/10/2010 10:47:00 AM cute one, good luck in the contest
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/10/2010 9:37:00 AM Very awesome choice, Good luck in the contest of Linda, Sylvia
James Rasmusson Date: 10/10/2010 9:36:00 AM Happy to learn you liked "Ode to a Shrunken Sweatshirt". I tried the 'center' method and a few others and nothing worked. I finally got it centered using spaces and a lone (hopefully un-noticed) period for the first line. Hugs, ~Jim

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