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Our footprints faded into the sand

Our footprints faded into the sand

Written By Dean Masciarelli

October 10, 2010 (5:19am)


Our footprints faded; into the sand 

From every step; 
that we 
had ever taken

Because; they were all  blown 
away; with the dust in the wind

I just wish; that I wasn’t so blind

Like I was; way back then

And I am sorry; that everything;
had to come; to an abrupt end

Unfortunately; that 
was your decision

But; you know something;
if I had it to do all over again

I would put your hand in my hand

And I would ask you to be mine;
like I 
had done; when it had first began









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  1. Date: 10/10/2010 2:07:00 PM

    lovely write, enjoyed...P.D.

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 6:02:00 AM

    Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet poem, vivid with emotions.

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 5:37:00 AM

    Sweet ending. raskin

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 5:08:00 AM

    Very creative and passionate write , Dean

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 5:06:00 AM

    Sad yet passionate...I am sure that many can relate..Sara