TERMINAL


The ticking of the clock
Echoes in the silence
Of the room.
Time,
Like my life
Ebbing away.

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/29/2012 8:42:00 AM congrats on your featured poem of the week
Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/28/2012 4:24:00 PM Congrats Sylvia on "Terminal" being featured. God Bless.
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/28/2012 5:40:00 AM Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Sylvia. Love, Carol
Patrick Cornwall Date: 3/27/2012 8:31:00 PM wonderful poem >Patrick
daver austin Date: 3/26/2012 2:55:00 PM A sound treat. Congrats on the selection. daver
duncan ceizar chappell Date: 10/10/2010 11:42:00 AM like this on so much thank you [duncan]
James Fraser Date: 10/9/2010 2:29:00 PM The clock of the awaiting. One reason why we must keep busy and active, no matter how old we are. No clocks when the lights go out, just infinity in blackness >> James :)
Dean Masciarelli Date: 10/7/2010 8:14:00 PM Hi Sylvia I forgot to mention my other site to you, because I have an idea that you will enjoy reading my poetry while you listen to music that I had personally included in all of my poetry here is the link :) www.poetrypoem.com/poet3238 Thank you again for all of your kind thoughts because you have truly made my day a very special one because of your comments that you have left me on my poetry, Sincerely Dean
Dean Masciarelli Date: 10/7/2010 8:06:00 PM Hi Sylvia I have a poem called sitting in the terminal waiting on a plane that I think you may enjoy just as much as I have enjoyed this poem of yours today, and by the way I stopped wearing my watch because I don't like to keep looking at it to see how much time has slipped away , Yet every day I do wake up with the early morning sun because it is my natural time clock to remind me that I was promised another day, Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poetry . GBYA sincerely Dean
daver austin Date: 10/7/2010 2:02:00 PM Let's hope this is NOT you, SYLVIA. I like your layout, giving mystic importance to each item. Dave
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/7/2010 9:00:00 AM Very interesting well penned write on Terminal with good images.Sylvia

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TERMINAL

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