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Clara

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                       Clara, my beloved guitar player
                  Beauty was the mystery of her
             Wonderment of her eye husked with passion
        Dread of a lifetime intonation cleft a glimpse of perfection
           She clipped the string as I nod within that melody
                Her pure slimy fingers trimmed the guitar's abnormality 
                    She plough the strings while I was clouded with suspense
                        She broke her hip after shunning the guitar’s defiance 
                            Hours later, I admit, this beauty was a coincidence

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  1. Date: 8/25/2011 3:26:00 PM

    Congrats on your fifth place win with this outstanding poetry luv..

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 2:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "A Jewel In Your Crown" contest Olajide. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:49:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Olajide. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 11:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Olajide. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 6:18:00 AM

    My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., olajide

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 6:15:00 AM

    congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 6:03:00 AM

    Congrats on your big win in P.D's contest with this amazing poem

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 10:29:00 PM

    O.A.,, ~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thanks for always supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 9:45:00 PM

    Congrats on your excellent win with this witty piece.. enjoy luv.. nice to see u on PS again..

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 8:03:00 PM

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!! really great win.. ^_^ *****jun-jun

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:56:00 PM

    You so diefied Clara in beauty of rimes, wonderful verse, Adelana.

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 1:46:00 AM

    great piece! congrats on having your wonderful piece being featured this week, hope you have many more interesting features. keep you pen writing. great you! Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 12/16/2010 12:58:00 AM

    Nice, that was a work of art

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 3:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on your work being featured on homepage this week..This must be an interesting guitar player..Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 7:52:00 AM

    So beautiful with great images! Well done...congrats on your feature! Lay

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 3:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup O. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 3:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup O. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2010 5:47:00 PM

    Just a wonder..loves the phrases "of her eye husked with passion' and "cleft a glimpse of perfection" very unique and thought provoking! Light & Love (please add your insight to my blog?)

  1. Date: 10/7/2010 9:38:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Words. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 9:14:00 AM

    Fine tribute you have paid to the Clara, the guitar player, Words wounded