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Morning Run

As
the sweat
rolled down the
nape of his neck,
I thirsted for his
strong hold and his sweet touch.
I wanted to stop him and
talk; but I just watched him pass by 
as I smiled at him and he smiled back.
His sparkling eyes say I should try again!

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  1. Date: 2/8/2011 9:41:00 AM

    Nice example of an etheree. Great descriptiveness in this work.

  1. Date: 11/27/2010 3:43:00 AM

    Very romantic work..Good luck in your meeting him..I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 4:36:00 PM

    Try again, Brandee! Forgive me but I tend to be adventurous...can be a good thing... sometimes. Love this and I mark it as one of my favs. today! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/13/2010 3:52:00 PM

    Wow, loved this Brandee. Lacing up my running shoes right now, hoping to pass you along the path --- lol. Loved the picture this paints. Easy to read, easy to understand. Nice flow. Nice Imagery. Nice poem. Joe

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 10:22:00 AM

    A pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Brandee. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 4:10:00 AM

    A very passionate feelings of love you have expressed well,Brandee

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 1:36:00 AM

    wow, such perception. lovethis. Harry