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Rolling Passion---Haiku

holding me softly
the sweat slowly dripping down
heart to heart embrace

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  1. Date: 2/10/2011 11:46:00 PM

    Yes, the title fits this splendidly!

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 2:26:00 PM

    Very descriptive with so few words.

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:36:00 PM

    Thank you Brandee for stoping by to read my work...I love this Haiku, I can see we write similar Haiku on love...Very enjoyed and will continue to go through more of your work...always Michael

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:33:00 PM

    McBlimey, I need to open a window after reading this hot shortie. Thank you ever so much for your lovely comments on 'The Clever Ape to the Horrible Human' it's basically all of us > have a lovely weekend >> James :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 2:23:00 PM

    Very romantic impressive write with good images, Brandee