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The deterioration of distant deities In a vicious solvent

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The deterioration of distant deities In a vicious solvent

What do you need?
Behind your heart’s curtain
Standing defiant
Kneeling slowly
Flowers of hope
We have sowed in flesh
Under narcissistic necessity
In An atmosphere 
Made for self protection
Clouds consisting of consciousness
Lost like empathy

Apocalyptic accusations
Fingers of fate
Stressful souls
Sharp words
Rip and tear
All meaning
That lives
When your eyes open

Let me burrow 
To secrets
Held so close
Gasping for your breath
And dying for your life
Let me in

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 10:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Julian. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 8:56:00 AM

    Julian, This is interesting, intriguing! This write has so many meanings... I read it 3 times and it meant something each read...Great job. Congrats on your feature! Lay

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 4:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Julian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 7:43:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Julian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 5:46:00 AM

    Well expresswed and nicely worded write, Julian

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 8:31:00 PM

    interesting write, enjoyed this one..P.D.