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Just one

Crushed beneath the skin of Brigit, hollowed out,

Stuffed full of mead & words;

 

I drift here

 

Losing touch, losing form

 

Wishing there was one,

just one who never hated me.

 

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  1. Date: 9/29/2010 12:16:00 PM

    I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Merritt. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:32:00 AM

    True feeling which arises at times!!!!!!!! beautiful!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:17:00 AM

    Nice display of breaking feelings, merritt

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 7:50:00 AM

    wow! Merritt , strong broken feelings, It must be hard to when one thinks the whole world is against us. I know exactly the feeling! Enjoyed your poem,.p.d.