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My Beautiful Pocahontus ~

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My Beautiful Pocahontus ~

Red Cloud....

These reminiscing waters have grown somewhat stagnant now; mirthless repose

It seems as the shimmering simile river begins its, millennials requiem

Canines still echoing somewhere beyond the sunlit sparkling of her eyes ~

While as their hunters now gather amid the densely diluted cannabis woods

In search of this lone gray wolf; Calaxial, their long sought after prize....

Sine qua nons aurora borealis' zenith from afar, his guide; apsis

Her fragrant scent beyond the wildflower clusters afore this linden twilights

Reflections of resplendencies graceful contours within, her beauties silkened coat ~

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{Amid Renaissonic Refurb}

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  1. Date: 12/23/2010 7:04:00 AM
    What beauty and romance you have peened here John. Your words seem to dance a graceful dance on my computer screen this AM. Thank you for your kind comments and Happy Holidays to you and yours...Lay

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 4:25:00 AM
    You chose a most interesting and mysterious cartoon character. Loved the imagery flowing here. Great write.

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 7:11:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts penned..Sara

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 3:31:00 PM
    'Pocahontus' is one of my fav cartoon characters. .You chosen a beautiful character here,to describe the beauty of a lady..i love the words you used in detailed description.This spell bound poem goes tmfvs and tnks for your kind comments John,Celene!

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 5:51:00 AM
    John, do this again and again ... excellent, it takes the breath away ... a heaven of imageries, a starry banquet of words, a rich delicious flow of conclusion, a sparkling poem of love.

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 4:05:00 AM
    I love the way this flows. You are a talented poet and your style is unique. I didn't knew about Pocahontus until now, but I've done some research on the internet and I found out a lot of interesting things. Thanks for sharing your knowledge with us, dear John. Have a wonderful day! Kisses and hugs,Emilia:)

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 1:29:00 PM
    Hello, my talented friend! Your poetry blows my mind! John and Pocahontas...this is amazing! Her essential vision from afar...his guide. Wonderful piece, John! God bless you. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 1:11:00 PM
    Always remarkable are the images you depict in your verses..always amazing! Yes, it is said that Pochantus was a beautiful girl and her beloved John was "beautiful" too. As regards the hunters ... well, of course for some people, others are always indispensable as long as they get what they want no matter the costs.. centuries later, the world still has not changed...enjoyed this..! Thanks for sharing it... Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 7:42:00 AM
    I love this poem John, I enjoy when two languages are mingled in poetry, I have a few like that, mine is english and french entwined and I just love them, and your poem is just so floaty and dreamy in its flow~~

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 8:34:00 PM
    I could picture this Native American scene so well through your words, John. It's like I was there, absorbing part of their culture. Written with grace and style, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 9:12:00 PM
    this is most beautiful, John. it took your readers breath away. the expression & words you use give amazing imagery in such a spiritual way.as if she is looking out at the river as the hunters gather things, while you're looking from afar, behind a tree, gazing at her beauty."reminiscing waters" beautiful. this is a favorite of mine.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 10:39:00 PM
    hiya my dear sweet friend long time no see, a beautiful written poem, kind of stunning, hope you ok John thing have been bad hewre for me jmaes and litle leanne but the Lord is upholding us with his mighty right arm and keeping us strong in times of trouble, its so wonderful to read your poem today it made me smile to see a friendly face around again. God bles you always from diane

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 6:51:00 PM
    could be a romanticism? enjoyed reading today!