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A Demented Clown

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A Demented Clown


                                       Drowning in a lonely and frosty lake,
                                       I pretend to struggle,
                                       I feel so fake.
                                       Holding my breath,
                                       each time I go down,
                                       distorts my face,
                                       like a demented clown.
                                       Perhaps I should surrender
                                       and give in?
                                       Allowing all of the lake's
                                       frosty water to win.  

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:40:00 PM
    You must stay afloat...For one day will come a boat...That will pull you to shore...To walk Gods great lands,again once more. :o)

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 2:37:00 PM
    know the feeling if i decide to surrender i'll be devoured by a desert dragon...same thing

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 1:29:00 PM
    That is a terrible situation that you have gotten yourself into..May I throw a lifeperserver...Sara

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 3:42:00 PM
    Now this is a poem, i wonder why one can feel traped like that. Sheol, enjoyed your poem it really has reality when one fakes and does not know when to surrender. Have a nice and cool one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 12:41:00 PM
    don't go down...keep floating/bobing holding is not that bad.