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Going Haiku Crazy

*Silent grave yard*

Calm,dry,stale air
no one comes to visit here
dead and forgotten
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*Earth Core*

Hungry hearts collide
sweet love under a full moon
earths core is spinning
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*Mix Breed*

Fangs break through your flesh
your blood flows into my veins
vamperic embrace
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*Drive by*
 
Stars sprinkle the sky 
the moon shows its full splendor 
I hate collage kids 
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*Tree Top*

Swaying with the wind
natures greatest rain dancers
dancing for heaven
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*Rain Killers*

Death do to wet air
dry throats gasping for water
thunder cries for them
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*Tender*
 
Baby crying out
let me soothe and comfort it
back into the pot 
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*Gurrr Me*

Venom racing through
body reacts and stiffens
I want to STRIKE you 
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~P.D. Going Haiku Crazy Contest~     coming soon

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  1. Date: 10/18/2010 4:33:00 AM

    i enjoyed the journey to haiku crazy!awesome!

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest..Interesting thoughts penned for sure..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 2:09:00 PM

    Hi Nathan Clever Haiku.Some of them quite beautiful,especially 'Tree TOP'-wonderful-Congratulations on your well deserved win.Thank you for your comments on my words I was so happy to be able to share them. luv June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 3:15:00 AM

    coming back here to say congrats, Nathan!! Enjoyed your haiku series very much :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 8:23:00 PM

    some of these were such a hoot, Nathan. Congrats in PD's contest! Surprised she did not put you higher (heehee) LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 2:56:00 PM

    Congrats Nate on your terrific win in the Haiku contest with these tremendous Haikus so expressive ... enjoyed my friend as u enjoy your win tonight with luv... my BFF ...

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:42:00 PM

    mmm! your blood flows into my veins!! my favorite line! Congrats! I will leave off at ~I want to STRIKE you~ lol,, xoxooxox,,,LOVE,,,p.d.

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:39:00 PM

    you're kinda warped aren't you, love it, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:16:00 PM

    Congratulations Nathan on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on this well deserved win, Nathan

  1. Date: 9/28/2010 10:23:00 AM

    Lol;-) now I'm LMFAO;-) Voodoo & chicken =(^.^)=

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 1:11:00 PM

    lmfao' b.boy

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 5:39:00 PM

    very nice-- and how cute is that? you and pd both have gone haiku crazy :) way too cool ;)-- I have to say I really like the tree tops and the gurr me ones lol :) thanks for all your comments :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 11:05:00 AM

    Nate, I enjoyed your series of Haiku poems, each with its own unique punch line.. thank you for your kind comments today...Hope your weekend will be an awesome one :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 8:21:00 AM

    I enjoyed the series of Haiku poems . One of my favorite forms and what I first started out on poetry with. I did one a day but never saved any of them and now I wish I did. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 7:27:00 AM

    captured the essence of the contest! thanks for the comments and have a Tender--Gurrr day

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 5:51:00 AM

    Interesting series of haiku, Nathan. I like the first one the best. Thanks for reading my poem. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 5:40:00 AM

    Interesting group of Haiku..Much work went into this one..Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 1:19:00 AM

    wow! enjoyed your poem, my fav is the gurrr one. I'm also glad all your sourroundings inspired your haiku. lol,, to the pot and babies,,,enjoyed. xoxoxooxoxooxoxo,..later,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:17:00 PM

    My favorite was the one about the tree tops. VEry nice and some of these others were funny, like the baby in the pot oh my!! Hmm, a PD haiku contest . Sounds tasty. Loved reading your haiku. Andrea

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 9:48:00 PM

    really enjoyed your haikus Nathan (though "Tender" is a little disturbing) Have a good night thanks for the comment

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 8:29:00 PM

    The first one is a brilliant one. I would rather call it an elegy in the memory of those, whom no one remembers now. Great Haiku. Thanks for your comments on my poem Rangoli -A gift for my Poetry Soup friends. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra......Nathan Dilts.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 8:17:00 PM

    Thanks for the comment Nathan. I must say you have a unique way of writing this Ihave to place in me favs