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"temptations"

Ill embrace your love into my seductive action
There for to create the perfect temptation 
I will revive a desire of obsession 
In my attraction to you

Ill revive a atmosphere surrounded  by a unthinkable satisfaction 
Would i dare to pass on to you the anxiety and transform you
Into a overwhelming victim
Or should i say concerning thoughts to you consciouness

Philosophical ideas nock on the door of my concious mind while 
I whisper in your ear phrases of love

Confess to me if you love me 
Or its just my attraction what 
drags you to temptation...

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  1. Date: 10/13/2010 9:02:00 PM
    Hi Joshep, really nice writing I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you. Peter K.

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 5:32:00 AM
    Congrates on having your poem featured this week Joshep poignant write ... love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:49:00 AM
    JOSHEP, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:41:00 AM
    hello! Joshep, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Joshep. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 3:24:00 PM
    very nice write enjoyed have a great weekend faleshia

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:14:00 PM
    anorher one of yor succes romeo..

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 9:08:00 PM
    oi, tempting read haha, kick ass write. nathan"

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 7:09:00 PM
    Luv this piece Josep... a quality of passion mixed with much emotion too... almost an invitation.. your philosophical ideas knock on the door of my conscious mind while I whisper in your ear phrases of luv... poignant line to set the poem's foundation luv.. enjoyed...

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 6:12:00 PM
    Well done Joshep, it is all good. Enjoyed your poem. Nice nice and full of passion. Have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 4:47:00 PM
    Very creative and interesting thoughts on love and its feelings. joshep