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stomping on a spark

what if we were brain cells 
communicating to fast for the eye to see
only were a baby's brain
always growing, living and dying
at an accelerate rate

now read this again
because it explains everything

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  1. Date: 9/24/2010 10:35:00 PM

    and on reading again it reads faster as the memory prompts the brain smile ... spelling on dieing/dying ... nice read Jayne

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 7:53:00 AM

    Well expressed thoughts , stomping on a spark, john

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:52:00 AM

    Food for thought, feel like I'm on an accelerated rate now. Excellent piece.