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soccer practice: in neighbor's bed wife scores weekly
4/4/4 inspired by the Senryu Fascist's Contest!

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  1. Date: 10/18/2010 9:08:00 AM

    Needed a 'jump start' to my Monday. ... got it reading your Senryu on Mondays..luv..thankxxx..now Ron and I are pulling off the highway ...taking care of business...haha

  1. Date: 10/8/2010 12:45:00 PM

    Ruben, thank you for the kind words and Fav! I already have you down as a Fav from awhile back now, after I saw how well you wrote minimalism! And as for your comment about mastering the form....I don't think I will have mastered it, even after an entire lifetime dedicated to it!~Chris

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 9:55:00 PM

    wow! now that's a soccer game to stay away from. I have no desire to lose, your poem rocks"

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:51:00 PM

    Do you love Mondays?neighbor? :)great post!

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 2:31:00 AM

    Is that soccer or sock her??? LOL Great write, Ruben. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 10:34:00 PM

    Ruben, old friend. I see you haven't lost your touch, bro. Since when do they play soccer with two balls? Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:58:00 PM

    Oh my God! Randy or blue? Good one! A keeper. Cutting wit that makes you laugh half amazed and half satisfied. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 1:48:00 PM

    *Cont'd* For now, I am going to keep certain things hidden. If anything replays itself in my next contest, I will reveal names and include pastes of any new soupmail Ha ha!

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 1:47:00 PM

    Ruben, I completely missed your comment on the blog....I didn't even see it, as well as a bunch of them right around yours! I was so distracted by Diane's comment about "saying sorry" Geez! She apologized for causing trouble? That isn't what I wanted! She didn't do ANYTHING wrong....that was the point! Wow! Ruben, I did show names and info of the offenders, but I removed 2 paragraphs before posting the blog. I know TPS frowns on actually using names to point fingers at? I was so tempted!

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 7:09:00 AM

    Didn't know that Andrea has such a good command of Spanish!! Enjoyed the write here, Ruben! Thank you for your hint! Claro que es "el estanque" y "la laguna" . I corrected it already as I first wanted to write laguna and then changed into estanque. So I didn't notice that mistake! Gracias por todos tus comentarios y que estes de nuevo en Soup! Ciao, Gert

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 9:04:00 PM

    Muchas gracias, senor. Y estoy tambien impresionada por la manera de que escribas en ingles!

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 6:38:00 AM

    Excellent write, and so true if one follows the english game. Harry

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 4:25:00 AM

    Congratulations Ruben on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 4:13:00 AM

    Really laughed hard at this Ruben....Got my smile back after reading your poems:) Emilia

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 11:02:00 PM

    HAHAHAAHA. LOVE this one Rueben. I'd give it higher!!! And where have YOU been hiding out all this time? LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 4:41:00 PM

    that is a good one....reminds me of ....well never mind.... LOL

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 4:41:00 PM

    I am glad to see you back around the soup again!! Keep sharing with us!

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 3:22:00 PM

    Ruben, this is so apparent to some of the English International currently. Some have been knocking at their teamates girls door. So currently topical, many congrats on your win. It's great to see you back online my friend >> James

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 3:07:00 PM

    Hello dear friend..glad to see you posting..and right back with a win..congrats..and stick around. I miss you. BG

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 2:53:00 PM

    This is too cute, a wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 2:44:00 PM

    chuckling and laughing because of your cute comment, haha :) am doing good, thank you for making me laugh ^_^ enjoy your day!! so nice to see you here again -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 2:20:00 PM

    You scored big (just like your neighbor's wife) with this Soup Nazi's contest. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 2:13:00 PM

    Wicked funny! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 1:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on this superb win in the contest, Ruben

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 1:20:00 PM

    NICE TO SEE YOU POSTING A POEM RUBEN, LOVE THE IMAGE LOOKS LIKE FUN*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 12:42:00 PM

    Hi Ruben :) Long time no see and I sure am glad to see your name pop up in Chris' winners! This sure is a witty senryu-- super congrats on your win ^_^-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 12:36:00 PM

    How did I miss this?? naughty boy!! :) Hooray and congratulations, again, for your cleverness! And...how I've missed seeing you around the soup more often! What a great feeling to see your name this morning! We have lost some of my favorite people among our soup family....I'm so glad you are still here, and hope all is going well for one of the nicest fellows I've met on the soup!! :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 12:36:00 PM

    congradulations. john

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 11:54:00 AM

    Congrats Ruben on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy with luv...

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 10:42:00 AM

    Ruben, congratulations on your win in my contest! It was so cool to see your name pop up on my winner's list! I was happy and honoured to see that you entered my contest, especially since I haven't seen a lot of new work from you( if any). You did great pulling off a very modern senryu here! I had so much difficulty with the placements....basically anyone who made it into the final round was 1st place in my books; simply for bearing with my role-play of the "Senryu-Fascist!"~Chris

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