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I'm Not the One

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Below is the poem entitled I'm Not the One which was written by poet Jamila Strong. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I'm Not the One

I don't believe you
You total bastard
Because I didn't give you any
Because I didn't let you get down with me
You wanna walk around with a frown
Treating me so cold and rude
I ain't a piece of food
You chew on and spit out
I don't give a damn if you pout
You think the thing between your legs makes you a man
Check this out you can have fun with your hand
I'm not the one to be treated like dirt
Go ahead and throw your game to another skirt
So go find that store and pick out your whore
And remember I'm a lady with class
When you lay down with dogs and wake up with fleas
I hope you get a rash on your a!!
But I'm not the one!

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  1. Date: 9/23/2010 1:52:00 AM
    very strong words indeed. You tell him!

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 8:41:00 PM
    thats pretty mature what your writing there jamila hit me up on face and maybe we can chat a while ...'el_guachupitero@hotmail.com....

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 6:01:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamila. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 8:10:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write.. hope your time on soup will be fun.. check out the contest scene to enter..with luv..

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:20:00 PM
    funny....you go!

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:00:00 PM
    A lot of anger comes through with this write. Very sad. raskin

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 3:10:00 PM
    A VERY POWERFUL POEM* SKAT