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~VISION~

~VISION~

Way in to my vision
I can see it all over again! 
What once has left me,
has found my soul again.
My life has hit the boiling point of hot!
All my decisions have been put to a side to rot.
Is this my only destiny?
Nothing can make it stop!
Is this my only mission?
Is my life set on self destruct?
What happen to the passion?
Nothing can make it stop!
No one can hear my cries!
No one can pick my heart up from drop.
Around me everything dies!
Everything turns black and white,
only in my eyes.
I will now sacrifice,
the last purity of my life.
In this world made up of lies!
I have no need to want to survive.

The bad thoughts taunt me.
Only with visions I see!
I want this goodness to let me be!
I have no desire to feel alive.
I have no desire to understand.
I want all the love motions to go away.
I want nothing in my hand.
Only the five things created by my land.
I will torment these feelings I hide,
while I'm holding on to the other side.
WHO NEEDS DEPRESSION ALL OVER AGAIN?

       BY,I.T.
SKAT POETRY
Dec-24-2008

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Vision is excellently adorned in golden ways depicting a beautiful image of many unsolved mystery of life. It's call WOW! Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 5:08:00 AM

    perfect dramatic verse.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Very deep emotive work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 5:41:00 PM

    People are so afraid to talk about these types of emotions and as a result plummet further into the darkness. Excellent poem about a very relevant topic. Well done SKAT

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:05:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 12:45:00 AM

    this me me think of the things we know that will destruct as but continue to do so...the pleasure is just overwhelming...love this skat...^_^ v

  1. Date: 10/11/2010 4:16:00 PM

    i can dig it to my grave

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 8:52:00 AM

    Depression is a dark shadow that robs us of our joy and inspiration.... I appreciate your honesty in this piece. So many of us know this struggle.

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 9:26:00 PM

    Just dropping by to say hi today! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 8:44:00 PM

    I like this deep thought provoking piece. A great write. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 12:47:00 PM

    well spoken and well written just so well done thanks for all your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 5:56:00 PM

    ain't nobody needs that Skat ! And I hope it will spare you!

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 7:56:00 PM

    nicely said!!!, who needs it lol, cool write mom, =(^.^)=baby skat

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 10:56:00 AM

    So deeply felt and emotional write, SKAT! I do hope that you are in a better mood after having written this Dramatic Verse! Great write! And thank you for commenting "After Sunrise". Have a nice Sunday!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 7:38:00 AM

    Excellent sketch of the state of depression in this beautiful write my friend. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.....s. k. a. t

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 1:08:00 AM

    Hi SKAT Yes .... you have portrayed very nicely what everyone feels when attacked by the "deep-resso" I myself am fortunate cos these sessions don't last long.... maybe only a few hours or a day ...then my optimism bounces me back........may I ask you to look at my CREDO FOR DARK NIGHT F THE SOUL......it might help a little to lift your spirits sincerely Syd

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 9:34:00 PM

    SKAT another master piece. now you got me all depressed, you have to cheer me up :-)

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 3:01:00 PM

    Correction: Thank you for sharing! Milt

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 2:59:00 PM

    Powerful and well-worded! Thank you sharing. I can sense quite a bit of depression. However, great expression! Milt

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:49:00 PM

    SKAT. my comment would be like someone drawing a beard on the Mona lisa. As usual SKAT, a work of art

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:29:00 PM

    A ver creative write SKAT. Yes, the blink contest is still open. Have a great day. Aloha, Connie

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 11:18:00 AM

    : ( this is so sad, Skat!! I hope it's just fictional. Vivid(and depressing) emotions in this very well penned poem. Smile! : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:54:00 PM

    Sup? Working over-nites and doing little reading rite now, but I mad it. A very nice write. Sounds like it's here and now, but I hope u'r ok. A very soulful piece, gurl!

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:33:00 AM

    This is a very depictive write dear poet, honed in to a very fine point when it comes to the dreaded...depression ! Great write ! james

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:52:00 AM

    I really like the emotions in this and I can relate to them. Hard hitting, nicely done. Hope all is well, hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 4:08:00 AM

    This is a very sad write, Skat....I hope you are okay..we have our bad times and out good times, we all get depressed sometimes but it will pass. Hugs, Emilia

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:41:00 AM

    mixed emotions here, very profound, so much feeling, yet for the reader so wonderful to read, i love this. Harry

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 11:41:00 PM

    Hey, sweet Irma. Thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 7:45:00 PM

    You said "What happen to the passion?" - and as long as you still wonder what happened to it and try to look for it there IS a hope and a future...Never stop looking for Passion in your life!!!...Thank you for your nice comments. Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 6:53:00 PM

    yes depression sucks. and so many htings in life to induce it. everyone should thank god i have pd or i would just kill everything lol

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