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Past, Present, Future

I walk thinking about my unforgettable history
I stop walking thinking about how i am going to survive Now
Yet, I'll have to walk to continue my journey somehow

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  1. Date: 9/12/2010 6:00:00 PM

    Nice creative thoughts on past, present and future, Kaila

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:22:00 AM

    Wonderful words ..enjoyed the creativity of your expressive but check your form as Senryu is a 5/7/5 syllable count on Soup and this perhaps would be more Free Verse as a form for your write..luv.. happy Sunday...with luv..

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:18:00 AM

    Walk and it will all make sense...Michael