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A Winter Treasure

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A Winter Treasure

beneath skies of topaz flawless infinite in depth and clarity the clouds had fallen... a soft white cushion just for us laughing we lay back and made snow angels together
**for Nikko's 29 words contest 30 words in total, 29 unique words. 'and' is repeated once.

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  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:37:00 PM

    What an absolute beauty this was, Sharon. A BIG congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 11:47:00 AM

    beautiful, congrats on your first place win in the contest

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 11:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 1st Place win Sharon in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 6:33:00 AM

    Congratulations, Sharon!! Beautifully done! hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 5:06:00 AM

    This is the best poem I've read today, It's really beautiful, a well deserved first place. Well done

  1. Date: 9/24/2010 12:46:00 AM

    Great job on your 1st place finish well written nice read Sharon...tks Luv, Kurt

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 7:56:00 PM

    Great work Sharon. congratulations on your first place for a beautiful poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 5:04:00 PM

    very nice ! congratulations Sharon on the big win!

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 1:18:00 PM

    Sharon, Thank you for sending positive thoughts to John Loving. The sadness he is feeling must be overwhelming now. He wanted his relationship with April to grow and lead to a future together. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, Sharon

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:39:00 PM

    Sharon, no wonder this entry won 1st place! Super congratulations on your win....the entire poem has such an uplifting quality, and the structure is very neat!~Chris

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:17:00 PM

    Sharon, congratulations on your splendid win in Nikko's contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 12:00:00 PM

    Congratulations on your success in Nikko's contest, Sharon! I love the presentation..hey, with a few changes you can create a Shape poem here! Have a great day. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 11:11:00 AM

    Congrats Sharone on your super first place number one win in Nikko's contest.. amazing 29 words and awesome poem... enjoy your top spot my friend with luv...

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 11:00:00 AM

    Hooray for you, Sharon!! Congratulations on this awesome poem! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place win, Sharon. Great use of imagery! Diane

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:14:00 AM

    Sharon!! You definitely blew me out of the water with this outstanding poem!! I was soo happy when I saw your name!! Like I said, I just fell in love with this right away and just knew this was gonna be my winner-- thank you for coming up with such a jewel of a write-- definitely going to my faves--^_^ Super congrats to you for getting 1st place! -super hugs! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:47:00 AM

    Beautiful use of 29 words- I love that - "the clouds had fallen..." Wonderfully done! I enjoyed this Sharon! hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 12:14:00 PM

    Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 7:06:00 AM

    Thanks for preparing me for the finer season in my life Sharon with this great poem ! much love, james

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 6:57:00 PM

    a lovely image i sought after reading this very peaceful and loving, enjoyed your write...P.D.

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 6:17:00 PM

    Very creative write with twenty nine words, Sharon

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 5:28:00 PM

    How creative, Sharon! And don't you just love making snow angels? You did a great job with the 29 words! Very enjoyable winter scene and the reader can sense the joy as well. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 4:55:00 PM

    This is just wonderful, Sharon!! I bet it will do well. Yeah, some of my line breaks are silly in that poem. I invented that 7/5 trochee form, and so to be consistent and model it as 7 syllables followed by five syllable lines, I have to break it at odd places sometimes. haha. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:51:00 PM

    Lovely entry for Nikko's contest Sharon. Snow angels, kool name >> James :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:17:00 PM

    This write has put me in the mood for snow; however, we rarely get any substantial amount here. I enjoyed the write, good luck in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:47:00 AM

    Sharon, what a dreamy write, definitely a gem.. I love "beneath skies of topaz" Best wishes for Nikko's contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:34:00 AM

    Lovely words Sharon and good luck in Nikko's contest.. a truly beautiful descriptive piece my friend.. good luck with your own contest as well..luv... happy Sunday..

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:22:00 AM

    Indeed a gem~ well done, Sharon. Just what Nikko hoped for, I'm sure! :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 6:04:00 AM

    Sharon, what I like about this poem, and the "word limit" allows...is what Kay Ryan refers to as "the edges" of a poem....this beauty is powerful in the weight of its "edges" spectacular! jimbo

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