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The Egg Eaters Hallow

HE WEARS A COAT OF ASH
ALWAYS TALKING 
TALKING FAST 
LIKE A SNAKE THROUGH THE GRASS
HE SLITHERS AND CRAWLS 
HE SLITEHRS AND CRAWLS
BUROWS THROUGH THE WALLS
WHATS YOUR NAME  
LETS PLAY A GAME 
I’M INSIDE I’M INSIDE
TRY TO HIDE
I WILL SEEK 
GO AND CRY 
GO AND SHRIEK 
I’M INSIDE 
TRY TO HIDE 
NO SECRETS YOU CAN KEEP 
WHERE DO I FIND THE ONE THAT SLEEPS
HE WANDERS THROUGH THE SHELL 
TO FIND IT AND TAKE IT 
TO SOME FAR OFF HELL 
HIS TONGUE IS QUICK 
HIS MIND FULL OF WIT
HIS CLAWS ARE MEAN 
HIS CLAWS ARE MEAN 
AND HIS MIND IS KEEN 
SEARCHING FOR WEAKNESS 
SEARHING FOR SECRETS 
HOW MANY OF YOU ARE THERE 
HOW MANY OF YOU COMPARE 
WHATS YOUR NAME 
IT’S A SHAME 
IT’S A SHAME 
I WILL BREAK YOU 
I WILL TAKE YOU 
FINDING FLAWS
OLD WOUNDS RAW 
DIGGING DEEP 
DIGGING DEEP 
HE FINDS IT IN THE KEEP  
HELLO LITTLE ONE 
HAVING FUN 
I HAVE NO NAME 
I PLAY NO GAMES 
ALL I HAVE ARE FANGS
AND YOU ARE HERE 
TO HATCH DISPARE 
I’V COME TO MAKE YOU DISAPEAR 
SEE YOUR WALLS 
SEE YOUR WALLS 
THEY’RE CLOSING IN 
THEY’RE CLOSING IN  
WE WILL BE COMPRESSED 
FORMING MESH 
MERGING INTO ONE 
LIKE ALL THE OTHERS 
YOU ARE DONE 
NEVER SPAWNED 
TO FIGHT THE DAWN 
I VE COME TO MERGE WITH  YOUR SOUL 
TAKE CONTROL 
YOU WILL BE 
JUST ANOTHER TWISTED PART OF ME 
ALL YOUR NEGATIVITY 
WILL SUBMERESE
WILL DISPERSE
JUST ANOTHER TWISTED PART OF ME
ALL YOU EGGS 
KEEP ME FED
KEEP ME GROWING 
SECRETS SHOWING 
KILLING DEMONS 
BEFORE THEY’RE BRED 
KILLING DEMONS 
TO KEEP ME FED 
A FORMLESS SOUL 
MADE OF MESH 
A FORMLESS SOUL 
MADE OF UNBORN FLESH 
WINING THE WAR 
ONE EGG AT A TIME 
ONE EGG AT A TIME 


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  1. Date: 4/18/2011 11:44:00 AM
    i eat egg eaters for lunch ' k.

  1. Date: 10/22/2010 11:37:00 AM
    Hi Nate: Great poem. Have a good 1. Thanks 4 reading and commentin on my poem. Peace: Sheol

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:00:00 AM
    I really liked the repeating in this- adds to the rhythm and power. Wow, what a read! hugs, kris

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 5:58:00 PM
    Happy u enjoyed my Nap Time poem..Nate..my BFF and hope all is well with u... miss your great contests luv... think about it..OK? your BFF..too..

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 11:52:00 AM
    The Dracula of all egg eaters. Look out Jonathon Harker Egg. I enjoyed this poem mucho. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:04:00 AM
    What a curious poem. loved the imagery though. Thanks a lot for your comments on mine.

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 11:40:00 PM
    Hmm, not sure what this is about. I liked Ruben's comment here. I never heard of an Emily Dickinson's snake. hahaha. I see why you and P.D hit it off so much. You write a lot a like kind of slam type poetry! Thanks for your comments. LUv Andrea

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 9:13:00 PM
    I hope you're not talking about the Emily Dickinson' snake! : ) Amusing ...playful piece, my friend. I can't help; I find it very erotic! : ) Ruben. PS: I don't like the "ALL CAPS".

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:14:00 AM
    oi! NathaN, how lovely can one say you are crazy and twisting the world around. ~~ONE EGG AT A TIME ONE EGG AT A TIME~~ Now how am I suppose to eat them eggs if U R feeding off of them alone. U R 2 greedy to share picking off the innocence of the meaning of life. Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 7:38:00 AM
    Wow ..all caps.. what a message u wanted to send my BBF Nate... I saw the picture yesterday on Soup and now put the pieces together luv.. your expressions are powerful luv.. enjoyed this happy Sunday... with luv..

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 5:54:00 AM
    Bravo!!! what a unique write , a pleasure to read.....Michael

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 3:36:00 AM
    (CONTONUED)I did enjoy your long wiggle thru the grass. Did you know snakes where know to eat dino,eggs. Your poem has me at my toes with eerie feelings my love. Later,..xoxoxooxoxoox,..all for you,..Me

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 3:33:00 AM
    Wow! Gees! I don't think all things taste good. I imagine eggs are very tasteless, unless you cook them in frying pans with SPAM mm mm mm. My sweet love. Your poem is to slithery,,LOL, It's funny how you said flaw. I don't think eggs have flaws,LOL,only if the mother lays them in the wrong place. Oh wait! Their is that chance,you'll eat one over exposed, rotting in the inside,LOL, I have no idea what to say, but that you need xooxoxox. (CONTINUED)

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 1:59:00 AM
    Interesting write!